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i am an orphan of america
the nigger, coolie, white, joint smoking youth
the embodiment of the isolated melting pot
i come from two, both of different worlds
one, a mix of indian and african
the other white

i am a student of failed institutions
forced to worship an aryan jesus and his father
bound to memorize 43 aristocratic males
my mind ejaculates dissent
the sexual forces that be are geared towards thought

my parents became those shunned upon
guevara, marx, carmicheal, newton, hampton,
paine, anthony, trotsky, davis, rueben, hoffman,
goldman, peltier, etc, etc!
when will america be worthy of such critics?

i have no need for your god and material
look! your barrels stand idle by!
send your boys to fetch them with their bibles stitched upon their hearts
©2008-2009 ~brianc748
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this is really raw and would like some input. i greet criticism

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:iconquasimito:
there's many "america"... much more interesting than the same boring america that our european medias are presenting us...
through music and literature i found out that in fact i love the other "america"...
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the last verse is powerful. what ever you do to this poem, keep it.

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"THOSE WHO WOULD GIVE UP THE LIBERTY OF NOT FOLLOWING SONICBUTTERFLY'S RULES FOR THE SECURITY OF MEETING HER EXPECTATIONS DESERVE NEITHER!" - *JupiterWave

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